This is from a gifted 6th grade boy in Northern California. He was really enthusiastic
and read part 4 (a full length novel) in just a few hours.
A wonderful and epic ending to the first novel of what I expect to be a series. The conclusion was fantastic and leaves plenty of room for a sequel. This might be a little to far ahead but I think that you could create a series about Syon. You write with great eloquence and amaze me with you fantastic works. Even if it doesn't get accepted by publishers, I want to thank you for the wonderful read you have given me and the world you have created.