Chapter 2 feedback
Favorite character- They’re all great, but I think I still have to say Ty.
What I liked best about the chapter- The opening to Elof2’s life.
Next chapter- Excited to see how you take advantage of the opening to chapter 3…you have a lot of thinking room to your advantage!
Other feedback- I don’t have too many negative things to say, just that Ty and Tyco’s jokes and teasing are getting better and better, always have a chance to laugh at something. I can see many young teens enjoying this book.